Thanks! I find that there's a lot of interrelated stuff in the game, so if you're not organized about how you explain things, you end up lost in digressions, or you forget things.
I had to include a lot of "I'll get back to this and explain it later", which is not my preferred way to teach a game, but at least, if it's organized, you get it covered and don't miss anything important!
I think you forgot an important rule: when a dogma has been shared (used by other player(s), the active player has to draw a card at the end of his action
Another clarification: the bottom of the first page says "If you have at least 5x the points of the lowest remaining (standard) achievement", but in actuality, you aren't required to achieve the lowest remaining standard achievement...it just usually works out that way.